3. What does the following excerpt reveal about Chang-bo? Chang-bo's job was to report business stories. He toured collective farms, shops, and
factories with a notebook and tape recorder, interviewing the managers.
Back in the newsroom, he would write his stories in fountain pen (there
were no typewriters) about how well the economy was doing. He always
put a positive spin on the facts, although he tried to keep them at least
plausible. *

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone