Read the sentence. We asked Ahmad to notify us if he was not coming through e-mail. Which is the best revision of this sentence? We, through e-mail asked Ahmad to notify us if he was not coming. If he was not coming through e-mail, we asked Ahmad to notify us. We asked Ahmad to notify us through e-mail if he was not coming. No change

We asked Ahmad to notify us through e-mail if he was not coming.

Explanation:

This one is the best revision.

i do not know what the passage is but i can give some examples

1. repetitive phrases may be used to create a emphasizing tone

2. pauses in sentences are used to create a dramatic effect but can also be suspenseful

3. using lots of exclamation marks and loud speech such as words in all caps can be creating a excited or possibly angry tone.

4. using lots of questioning phrases my mean that they are in suspicion of something.

5. using lots of questionable statements or questions can imply of a sneeky or sly tone.

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