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    In 1886, automobiles made their first appearance. In this case, cars have been around for 134 years! However, using a car for this long means a person found ways to save an endangered person and transport produce fast. Due to this, they cause an excessive amount of responsibility. With that, realize that safety is important while driving. Automobiles continue to save people’s lives and transport food fast. Consider the issue of owning a car and recognize the safety that comes along with it.

Owning a car is an enormous responsibility

     An individual has the authority to control what will happen next. "With great power comes great responsibility" (Stan Lee) this quote means that if set with the ability to have or do something expect the responsibility that comes with this power. If given a car (power) one must face the responsibility of paying for a car monthly. Naturally, being responsible for a car is an unspoken rule. However, taking care of a car can take an inconsiderable sum of money. For instance, car insurance (Car insurance is putting a payment for financial protection just in case of any accidents), rotating tires (rotating tires is putting the front tires to the back, and the back tires to the front because driving consists of using the two front tires constantly.), getting gas, and paying for when the car fails to correspond can be a big responsibility. In other words, all of these costs can vary around $1,939. If not properly taken care of it will increase the risk of not being safe in the vehicle (another word for automobile or car). To sum it all up, whatever decision made except the outcome that comes along.  

Safety is the number one priority

    Without any exceptions, one shall never be too cautious. According to the quote "Always be safe than sorry" by Samuel Lover, he seems to agree. The meaning of this quote means to be careful now so problems will not worsen later. No matter what, if a flashing light goes off in the dashboard (it's located in front of the passenger and driver.) take the chance to take a look at what is going on and do not ignore the problem.  One should always be careful, even when driving. As reported, an article states "In 2019, an estimated 38,800 people lost their lives to car crashes." Things that can cause these deaths are driving over the speed limit, a car malfunction (break down or not functioning correctly), becoming distracted, and bad weather. Of course, preventing these accidents can be easy. To stop these things from happening, stop speeding, take cars to get a check-up, stay off any electronics, and check the weather before driving. In closing, one should become mindful when a warning occurs. (For example, smoke under the roof of a car).

     This bar graph shows the number/ages of deaths in the USA.  Being under 16 is the lowest possibility of dying and it seems the death count is around 15. The highest death age is between 25-29 and the death count is around 8500.

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in paragraph 6 of "sinners in the hands of an angry god" by jonathan edwards, he talks about how doing good things alone will not save men from going to hell because they're at the mercy of the will of god. "spiritual reform" provides men with a false sense of safety.