English, 12.12.2020 16:00 shubbs1038a

Can someone proof read my essay and give me tips please?

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Answer from: musicqueen360

I just have 1 suggestion. What if you put how people can bounce back from lonliness.

But other than that this essay is great!! :)

Answer from: Quest

Dr.king , i would take my mental flight by egypt and i would watch god’s children in their magnificent trek from the dark dungeons of egypt through, or rather across the red sea, through the wilderness on toward the promised land.his speech"i have a dream" to encourage people that change will come. this speech was very important during the civil rights movement and was a contributing factor in the end of racial injustice in society. the intended audience of "i have a dream" is white people. i hope this

Answer from: Quest

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.

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