Revise your multi-paragraph explanatory essay using formal writing style, technical language, and transitional words. Use the following checklist to ensure that all the requirements are in place: Underline the thesis statement in the introductory paragraph.
Underline the topic sentence in each body paragraph.
Circle the supporting evidence used in the body paragraphs.
Count the number of transition words used in each paragraph.
Underline the restatement in the concluding paragraph.
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Excerpt from the rainbow, chapter x (excerpt) d. h. lawrence then there was an outcry. mrs. brangwen would not have it; no, she would not. all her innate dignity and standoffishness rose up. then there was the vicar lecturing the school. "it was a sad thing that the boys of cossethay could not behave more like gentlemen to the girls of cossethay. indeed, what kind of boy was it that should set upon a girl, and kick her, and beat her, and tear her pinafore? that boy deserved severe castigation, and the name of coward, for no boy who was not a coward—etc., etc." from the textual evidence provided in this paragraph, what conclusions can the reader draw regarding the vicar? a) he favors boys over girls. b) he has no strong feelings. c) he supports mrs. brangwen's perspective entirely. d) he tends to be indulgent towards children's misbehavior.