I need help wit the first paragraph, Please and Thanks you Develop a satirical piece in 4-5 paragraphs critiquing some aspects of our society that you think needs to be changed/fixed. Pick a specific aspect of society to critique. (Drug Abuse). Remember to use satirical techniques ( IRONY, PARODY, HYPERBOLE, WIT, PARADOX). Use MLA format, 12 points, Times New Roman, double space. Highlight the sentences where you use satirical techniques. Use green.

good, but the use of satirical techniques needs improvement. The first “good” example does a better job of capturing the satirical tone desired for this assignment. Remember, you can also look to all of the satirical pieces in the SpringBoard book as examples.

Explanation:

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

a is is the correct answer