HELP ASAP! Armand has written a draft essay comparing print textbooks to digital textbooks. His purpose is to convince readers that digital textbooks are better than print textbooks and should be used in more school districts. Read Armand’s draft. Then revise it to improve these elements:

purpose
focus
organization
evidence
supporting details
grammar (for example, pronoun-antecedent agreement)
sentence effectiveness (including parallel structure)
The Draft:
The first consideration that needs to be made when thinking about the beneficial nature of textbooks is how easy it is to use a tablet to access digital materials like a books, resources, and other learning tools. Furthermore, school districts no longer need to consider how they will budget for new textbooks at the time when the information becomes outdated. Instead, digital platforms are more easily updated when new and more relevant materials become available. The use of digital texts in the classroom makes for less printing of physical textbooks and a broader range of access to the types of materials that can be used for learning.

However, there are some considerations that may cause some to question the benefits of using tablets. One major factor that is often debated is the financial burden of purchasing tablets. While this is a steep financial investment for districts to take, it is an investment. Investments can be risky. Ultimately, the goal of an investment is the return it provides. In this case, the return is the opportunity to transform the way students learn and to also prepare them for college and career readiness in a digital world. Additionally, it is important to note that many school districts invest in refurbished tablets and allow students the option to bring their own devices.

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?

perhaps, jefferson is the best spokesman that speak about american ideals of equality and liberty.

no one should be immune to the law because if there is an existence of someone that is above the law, a true equality would never be achieved

hope this

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i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and walked in with his head held high.

1. he leaned on the wall and observed me carefully.

2. his harsh scrutiny made me self-conscious of my skills in the lab.

3. perhaps it was just me, but the air in the laboratory began to thicken as i found myself having difficulty to breathe.

4. i turned to look at him fully as i mentally prepared myself for what my very first words would be to thomas edison.

5. the next couple of seconds shocked me. it wasn't me who spoke, but rather him and with diction i could never think of using in a simple sentence.

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hey, sorry if this was bad, i really didn't know what to write but i wanted to you. is there anything that you had to include within the excerpt?