English, 08.12.2020 01:50 PinkyUSA18
HELP ASAP You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article. Then you will write a reflection on the changes you have made. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and the reflection paragraph.
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Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
Save and submit:
The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
The reflection on the changes you have made
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Submit your work in 02.09 Syntax and Voice.
THE PARAGRAPH: This is influencing the fishermen, purchasers, and individuals in general. Yet additionally the number of inhabitants in the anchovy populace. This influences the fishermen since they need to get fish to offer to the purchasers. Yet, likewise individuals in general since we eat fish however on the off chance that the jellyfish are eating to numerous there are dangers to the sea, also there are different animals that eat anchovies and if the jellyfish are eating them and were getting them to sell the animals in the sea won't have anything to eat and it will wreck the populace. But since if this does not get dealt with different creatures will be in danger.
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English, 21.06.2019 15:40
Read the excerpt from part 2 of the odyssey. what theme is supported by the excerpt? 1. it is important to see new sights. 2. people should indulge their curiosities. 3. it is wise to follow the counsel of trusted friends. 4. people should trust their instincts.
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English, 21.06.2019 18:30
Read the excerpt below from "letter from birmingham jail" and then answer the question below: "my citing the creation of tension as part of the work of the nonviolent resister may sound rather shocking. but i must confess that i am not afraid of the word "tension." i have earnestly opposed violent tension, but there is a type of constructive, nonviolent tension which is necessary for growth. just as socrates felt that it was necessary to create a tension in the mind so that individuals could rise from the bondage of myths and half truths to the unfettered realm of creative analysis and objective appraisal, so must we see the need for nonviolent gadflies to create the kind of tension in society that will men rise from the dark depths of prejudice and racism to the majestic heights of understanding and brotherhood." how does king's repetition of the term "tension" impact the meaning of the text? question 5 options: dr. king says that he is afraid of the word tension and he doesn't think it is necessary. dr. king repeats the word tension to explain how he sees the word as a negative force that discourages change. dr. king repeats the word tension unintentionally, and it doesn't impact the meaning of the text. dr. king repeats the word tension to support how he views the word tension as positive and growth-producing.
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English, 21.06.2019 20:00
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English, 21.06.2019 22:30
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