HURRY PLEASE. Read the student thesis, then answer the question. There have been many studies about the effect too much television has on children and whether it is harmful or beneficial. The best way to improve this thesis is to include the topic being discussed. clearly take a side. express a viewpoint. cite the source of the study.

You have to choose the topic basically picking either television has a harmful or beneficial effect on children then turn that into a topic such as "Studies show that television has harmful effects on children."

Explanation:

answer: yes, ive read this book! now whats the problem ?

explanation:

if this is referring to star wars, han shot first.