What do you think would have made the essay more effective and why? Your answer should be 3 to 4 sentences.

Thinks that made an essay more effective are follows

I) Tittle (the more interesting the tittle is, the more it would create an impact on reader to read it)

ii) uses of quotes and phrases in essay ( it makes an essay more creative )

iii) uses of simple language rather than using very hard words ( it helps the reader to understand easily )

iv) Creativity

the red coloration of the lungs looks alarming and adds to the overall message that the flu is threatening apex

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