The following extract is missing four commas. Insert them in the appropriate places.  

The meadow which was covered with  yellow, blue and white flowers was  a beautiful sight. The native gras ses were thriving because the whole  area, barring only the pasture had  become a registered nature reserve . In fact, it was so pretty that I  tried to take a picture, but then I  saw that my phone battery had died . Disappointed I walked back to the  hotel to recharge it.

The meadow, which was covered with yellow, blue and white flowers, was a beautiful sight. The native grasses were thriving because the whole area, barring only the pasture, had become a registered nature reserve. In fact, it was so pretty that I tried to take a picture, but then I saw that my phone battery had died. Disappointed, I walked back to the hotel to recharge it.

the rhetorical devices that he used in "common sense" are syntax for his sentence structure and pathos for his emotion against the british unfairly treating the "americans" and logos of what documents that what happened to the pilgrims when they had the mayflower compact and how that the british were wanting to have one religion but the compact said for any religion to be accepted.