So welp i didn't know what cute was but then girls started calling me cute and welp thats when i got to know im cute. not more than my gf tho VROOM VROOOM

When an author introduces a new character in a short story, he or she must quickly establish the character's key traits. in this portion of the narrative, the author misses an opportunity to develop mr. valentine. rewrite this section of the story to better establish mr. valentine as a complex character.