Do this essay pls Upload here your completed essay about whether or not it is expectable for companies to advertise in schools. You essay needs to be 4 paragraphs long. Each paragraph should have 4 to 8 sentences. Your essay needs to have an introduction, 2 body paragraphs and a conclusion. Your spelling and grammar needs to be correct. Your purpose, focus and organization needs to be coherent with the prompt.

Rubric

Essay Rubric

Essay Rubric

Criteria Ratings Pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomePurpose, focus, and organization

40.0 pts

Full Marks

a) Your response is consistently focused and keeps the purpose and audience in mind throughout the paper! b) You managed to eliminate all the extra “fluff”. c) Sources are used throughout your text. d) Transitions are great! e) Your intro and conclusion nicely sandwich your paper. f) You kept the writing formal.

30.0 pts

Partial

a) The response is focused, and it shows that you thought about the reader. b) The organization is there and you only let some fluff in. c) You used a variety of sources. d) Your transitions could use a little work on your transitions. e) You used an introduction and conclusion f) You did your best to keep a formal tone.

20.0 pts

Partial

a) You thought about the purpose, but might have lost track here and there. b) Some parts of your writing might not be as organized as it should be. c) You used facts, but not sources d) You have a few transitions, but others are missing e) There’s something lacking in the introduction and conclusion. f) You might sound formal here and there, but overall the text is informal.

10.0 pts

Partial

a) The main idea got lost in your writing somewhere. b) You forgot about your transitions, c) Your facts are unrelated, and you didn’t use any sources d) There doesn’t seem to be enough writing to show what you know e) The introduction and conclusion are missing. f) This is a very informal piece of writing.

0.0 pts

No Marks

40.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeEvidence and Elaboration

40.0 pts

Full Marks

a) Your response in in-depth and compelling. b) You did a great job of using multiple sources. c) You used elaboration in a variety of ways (quotes, definitions, examples…). d) Your ideas are clear. e) You used vocabulary that is specific to the topic. f) The sentences in your paper are a delight to read.

30.0 pts

Partial

a) You were able to put in a fair amount of relevant facts from sources, although many of the facts are not clear. b) You elaborated on your facts. c) You expressed your ideas with a mix of general and specific language. d) You used some vocabulary specific to the topic. e) There is some variation in your sentence structure.

20.0 pts

Partial

a) You used some evidence from your sources. b) Many of your facts seem repetitive. c) You simplified many of your main facts. d) Some of your words are used incorrectly e) Your sentences seem too simple, spice it up with details and elaboration.

10.0 pts

Partial

a) You didn’t site your sources, or your facts are incorrect. b) Your ideas are vague and confusing. c) Your vocabulary doesn’t fit with the topic d) Your sentences are all very simple.

0.0 pts

No Marks

40.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeConventions

20.0 pts

Full Marks

a) There are little to no errors in your spelling. b) There are little to no errors in your grammar

10.0 pts

Partial

a) There are several mistakes in your spelling. b) There are several mistakes with your grammar.

0.0 pts

No Marks

20.0 pts

Total Points: 100.0