Read the passage. What is an effective way to rewrite the passage to avoid redundancy and wordiness? Most people, regardless of their age, love the taste of sweet and sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. These foods are more often than not high in calories because of the sugar content. Because of the high sugar content and high calories, such foods can cause people to gain a lot of weight.

Most people,regardless of their age,love the taste of sweet and sugary treats like chocolate,soda,cookies. thus,eating much candies causes, diabetes, getting over weight,and much. To put the cheery on top, we should eat candies in moderation.

based on the biblical principle philippians 4: 13 "i can do everything through christ who strengthens me." i agree that it is through him that we are given the strength to cope with every situation.

and based on the biblical principle proverbs 16: 32 "better to get angry slowly than to be a hero. better to be even-tempered than to capture a city."   i agree with the author of the passage to the extent that the nobility of heart demonstrates the strength of a person. those who are contemptuous, get angry easily and show their anger toward others are really weak, but those who are noble and make sure to not hurt other people and their feelings are strong people.