What makes this paragraph an example of point-by- point writing?
Chefs and dancers are both exciting careers. Chefs work
in a small kitchen area moving quickly, while dancers
work on large stages, moving around as well. Both
careers face pressure from performing for an audience:
Dancers move in front of crowds of people, and the food
that chefs prepare is judged by people who eat in their
restaurants.
The paragraph looks at a lot of different criteria,
including excitement level and income.
* The paragraph focuses more on dancers than chefs
in discussing excitement.
O The paragraph focuses more on chefs than dancers
in discussing excitement.
The paragraph considers chefs and dancers around
the idea of excitement.