For this assignment, you will re-write this paragraph. The objective is to join sentences that have a relationship. While all sentences in this paragraph are related to the topic, not all sentences need to be joined. Instead, you will want to
keep some simple sentences. Here is the paragraph that needs some revision, and I have highlighted the sentences that
should remain as simple sentences.
My brother Alex has more "interests" than anyone I know. The novelty always wears off very quickly. I know my brother!
Last week, Alex wanted to join the school band. He asked if he could rent a drum set. I burst out laughing. My parents
just looked at each other. I knew what they were thinking. Would they be able to convince Alex to try something a little
quieter? Would he insist on the drums? Well, they convinced Alex to try something else. It wasn't something quieter.
Today he informed us that he's decided to try the tuba. In fact, the school has an extra tuba. Mom and Dad won't have
to rent one. Needless to say, I hope this novelty wears off very, very, very quickly!

"Stories have always been an important part of my life that have held immense fascination for me, starting from when I was just a child. When I was very young, my favorite fairy tale  was Cinderella. I would ask my parents to read the story to me every night—and I always demanded that they use different voices for each character. Sometimes I would make up my own dialogue to supplement the story. When I got older, I even wrote my own stories. They were full of larger-than-life characters and magical events, just like the story of Cinderella. My dream is to one day work in the film industry bringing exciting stories to life."

Explanation:

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the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.