HELP!! ILL GIVE BRAINLIEST Which revision of the passage makes the best use of transitions?

Why does the author follow up on the story of martin torres near the end of the article? what important ideas does this part of the article support?

Ineed ideas for this essay something easy that i can do does anyone have any ideas on what i should write on for this 100 points ! write a procedural essay with media that is 1 ½–2 pages in length. clearly state your topic, and include all steps necessary to complete the procedure. you will submit your prewriting and planning documents along with your essay.

The waves crash on the shore ? alliteration ,assonance,onomatopoeia