Hi! Please help! I have an analysis due soon so can someone please proofread it and give me suggestions. Thank you! In Edward Scissorhands, Tim Burton develops his style of whimsical and mysterious. He displays a whimsical mood by using sound whenever Edward is outside of the house, creating the ice sculpture for the Christmas party, despite that many of the neighbors are unsettled and terrified of him. With a smile on her face, Kim comes outside and sees Edward making the magnificent angel and twirls around, making it seem like a fairytale. The snow falling from the ice sculpture illustrates a gentle, relaxing feeling that Tim Burton attempts to make the audience feel. This style is created by his choice of non-diegetic sound because the music is gentle and reflects how kind-hearted of an individual Kim is. The music sounds as if someone is singing peacefully, which creates a Christmas or dreamy feeling for the viewer. Due to the soothing music, the whimsical sensation induces a playful and peaceful mood. Technique and mood create style because all the aspects of the film including sound and lighting all together create style within the film. The technique and mood create a style of childlike innocence because it creates a fairytale effect on the viewer. You can also sense romance between Kim and Edward, which contributes to the childlike component.

Langston hughes cited walt whitman as one of his greatest influences and some believe that hughes wrote "i, too, sing america" in response to whitman's "i hear america singing." using on whitman's poem. consider aspects such as structure, there, word, choice, etc., as you craft your response. your response will be scored on how well you: -demonstrate your understanding of the ideas of the text -use evidence from the text to develop and support your ideas -organize your response in a logical manner -demonstrate an appropriate writing style through the use of precise word choice and varied sentences -use standard conventions for writing

Ajourney with my father adapted from my reminiscences by sir rabindranath tagore probably in order to teach me to be careful, my father placed a little small change in my charge and required me to keep an account of it. he also entrusted me with the duty of winding his valuable gold watch for him. he overlooked the risk of damage in his desire to train me to a sense of responsibility. when we went out together for our morning walk, he would ask me to give alms to any beggars we came across. but i never could render him a proper account at the end of it. one day, my balance was larger than the account warranted. "i really must make you my cashier," observed my father. "money seems to have a way of growing in your hands! " that watch of his i wound up with such indefatigable1 zeal that it had very soon to be sent to the watchmaker's in calcutta. i am reminded of the time when, later in life, i was appointed to manage the estate and had to lay before my father, owing to his failing eyesight, a statement of accounts on the second or third of every month. i had first to read out the totals under each head, and if he had any doubts on any point, he would ask for the details. if i made any attempt to slur over or keep out of sight any item which i feared he would not like, it was sure to come out. so, these first few days of the month were very anxious ones for me. as i have said, my father had the habit of keeping everything clearly before his mind—whether figures of accounts, or ceremonial arrangements, or additions or alterations to property. he had never seen the new assembly hall built at bolpur, and yet, he was familiar with every detail of it from questioning those who came to see him after a visit to bolpur. he had an extraordinary memory, and when once he got hold of a fact, it never escaped him. my father asked me to copy the favourite verses, with their translation, from the book he liked reading every day. at home, i had been a boy of no account. here, when these important functions were entrusted to me, i felt the glory of the situation. 1. tireless 7 how does the narrator support the idea that his father keeps everything clearly before his mind? a. by giving the example of his father's response when his account did not tally with the money that he had in hand b. by mentioning that his father was interested in everything that happened around him c. by giving the example of his father knowing every detail of the new assembly hall at bolpur d. by mentioning that his father had marked his favorite verses from his favorite book

What should you most consider when deciding whether an image is appropriate for your technical document?