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Which revision improves the precision of the text?
Read the excerpt from a report
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English, 12.11.2020 14:00 jaydenromero31
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Which revision improves the precision of the text?
Read the excerpt from a report
(1) Stopping trash before it gets to the ocean is way
better than having to clean it up in the ocean. (2) The
city of Baltimore has a large machine called Mr. Trash
Wheel. (3) The machine is powered by the sun and the
flow of the river. (4) Floating booms off the front of the
machine funnel garbage toward a conveyor belt. (5)
The belt takes the garbage from the water and puts it in
a dumpster. (6) The trash wheel helps collect garbage
in the river after it flows out into the ocean
O In sentence 2, change "large" to "big."
O In sentence 3, change "powered" to "run."
O in sentence 4, add "or barriers" after "booms."
O In sentence 6, add "or the sea after "the ocean."
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