Prompt Question: What is one way that people can work together to make a difference? Thesis: People working together can make a difference in someone’s life or environment.

Body Paragraph:1) Johnathan had come up with a good idea, and thought, “i have to share this idea at school.” 2) He wanted to see if his student council would help out cleaning highways. 3) He told the student council president about his new project he wanted to get started on. 4)They quickly approved it. 5) Everyone had fun while cleaning. 6) They did alot of work, and they were very happy to help their community. 7)It made a difference to the environment and to the animals in it.
1) What transition could be added to the start of sentence 1?
For example,
In conclusion,
In addition,
However,

2) What synonym could be used for the word “good” in sentence 1?
sufficient
acceptable
ingenious
adequate

3) What word should be edited for spelling in sentence 6?
Change to to too
Change alot to a lot
Change their to there
Change community to comunity

4) How should sentence 3 and 4 be combined?
He told the student council president about his new project, he wanted to get started quickly, and they approved it
He told the student council president about his new project, and it was quickly approved.
He told the student council president about his new project he wanted to get started on so thankfully they quickly approved it and they got started right away..
None of the above

5) What word should be edited for capitalization in sentence 1?
He
Idea
I
School