Can someone please help me with this journal

Should ticktock be banned? No because ticktock is very entertaining and fun. It makes people laugh and cry. Ticktock gives people the opportunity to shine. Ticktock can create great opportunities because on Ticktock you can go viral and become famous and with that fame it brings money. The money can be very helpful to people's families or for people who really need money to help them . Ticktock can be very addicting up to the point where you don't realize how late it is and you need to sleep. Ticktock can mess up people's sleeping schedule. Ticktock is a app where you and others can create 30-90 second videos of whatever you want. I would feel sad if ticktock was banned because it brings a lot of joy and happiness into my life.

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