Is this a good book, i just wrote it, plz be honest!! its only half of page one! “The Truth to It All” Chapter 1

I 11 years old when it happened, I didn't know what to do, “I didn't get it” I said, “we always lived such a happy life”. It was raining outside, it was cold, it was scary to think that we could get through this storm. A storm of so many things. I was in foster care; they took me from school, I had to change from 2 schools already and soon I will be in a different one again. But it has been a year now and I'm 12 years old, my mom is an hour away from me, I call her tonight. I always get to call her on Mondays and Thursdays from 6:30 to 7:30. I missed her so much, there were so many happy memories that make me smile, some will make me cry. My sister I have only seen once, she was with me at first but then they separated us, god knows why, we had gone to the mall and bought sister bracelets, it was fun! I remembered how much we joked, the bracelets were for your ankle, but they were for kids and when we tried to put them on, they couldn’t fit, we laughed so hard, it felt good, but it hurt, it hurt to think of why they would do that, we were always together, but now there is no one to talk too. I stay quiet, mostly to myself, I don’t speak unless I am called for, I like to think of myself as curious and a little talkative. She's mad, I'm mad, I'm in foster care and she yells at me for not taking her dog outside. Sometimes I feel that she cares about the dog more than me, I'm fine though, I would say I care about the dog more than my foster parent. Her name is Blake, she's adorable too, She's shy though. I'm shy too, I want to leave, to run away, to get out of my head, everything hurts, I don’t have my mom anymore, or my dad, sister, cousins, any family I have are gone. They came to school, at the end of the day, they took me to the police station and said that they are going to put me in a group home, I loved it there, I never got to say goodbye, or I love you to my mom, they were so nice to me, I had 2 best friends and now they're gone, and I feel like they took a piece of me with them.