Prompt: You have read Act 1 scene 1 of Fences, about a disagreement between Troy and his son Lyons over finances. Imagine that you are either Troy or Lyons and write
a journal entry describing your feelings about the disagreement. Be sure to include
details about your experience and the impact Rose had on your perspective.
Rubric:

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

it creates a visual picture of the man.

it conveys what the scene sounds like.

it describes the actions of the boy.

it reveals the poet’s opinion of the characters.

it encourages readers to care for the characters.

can you put the options and excert up