What is the best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning?

the wedding of the bride and groom that was held in a local park was interrupted by an unexpected rainstorm, which drenched the wedding party and the guests.

choices
a the bride and groom of the wedding were drenched in a local park by a sudden rainstorm.

b an unexpected rainstorm drenched everyone in a local park.

c a wedding held in a local park was ruined for the bride, her groom, and their guests.

da rainstorm interrupted a wedding in a local park, drenching everyone attending.

At first i was afraid to approach him—then the fear left me. he was sitting looking out over the city—he was dressed in the clothes of the gods. his age was neither young nor old—i could not tell his age. but there was wisdom in his face and great sadness. you could see that he would have not run away. he had sat at his window, watching his city die—then he himself had died. but it is better to lose one's life than one's spirit—and you could see from the face that his spirit had not been lost. i knew, that, if i touched him, he would fall into dust—and yet, there was something unconquered in the face. how does the conflict at the beginning of the paragraph move the plot forward? the narrator realizes that he is scared of the gods. the narrator realizes that he distrusts the spirits the narrator realizes that the god was a man. the narrator realizes that he is powerful like the gods.

Which of the following questions is the best example of a good research question? how did howard carter catalog and remove all of the artifacts from king tut’s tomb? how did king tut most likely die? how was king tut’s tomb discovered, and what impact did it have on archaeology? when did king tut become king, and what laws did he pass?

Asap i will give brainliest to the first correct answer (1) wayne gretzky once said, “you’ll always miss 100% of the shots you don’t take.” (2) life would be dull and boring if no one took risks. (3) many people have accomplished astonishing things because they took a risk. (4) in other words, my mind is set on the belief that it’s worthwhile to take risks. (5) one reason to take a risk is that you can learn from your mistakes, and that allows you to accomplish your goal correctly the next time. (6) for instance, the wright brothers dreamed of being able to fly. (7) they decided to invent the airplane. (8) certainly, they weren’t able to construct it perfectly the first time, so they took a risk and kept trying until they finally got it right. (9) because they learned from their mistakes, that encouraged them to continue to work hard and succeed at inventing one of todays most convenient inventions, the airplane. (10) another reason to take risks is that you can form relationships. (11) a good example of this is the play, “novio boy” by gary soto. (12) rudy, the main character, asks patricia, his crush, to go on a date with him. (13) he took a risk because she is older than him, and rudy wasn’t sure of what she would say. (14) fortunately, patricia agreed to go out with him. (15) therefore, taking risks can be positive and you form relationships. (16) in conclusion, you never know what you are capable of until you take a risk. (17) there could be many motives that could make you want to take a risk. (18) the result could turn out to be either good or bad. (19) despite the consequences, you never know what you could achieve before you take the risk. what change, if any, is needed in sentence 1? question 1 options: a) delete the comma after said b) change you'll to you'll c) change always to allways d) make no change