You don’t need the passage I’m between B or C 1. What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 3?
A I am convinced that students would do better in school if they had a midday break that
allowed them enough time to eat a good meal and that allowed them enough time to
recharge their brains with physical activity.
2
B
1
I am convinced that students would do better in school if they had a midday break that
allowed them enough time to eat a good meal and recharge their brains with physical
activity.
2
C I am convinced that students would do better in school if they had a midday break that
allowed them enough time to eat a good meal that recharged their brains with physical
activity.
I am convinced that students would do better in school if they had a midday break that
allowed them enough time to eat a good meal because they need to recharge their
brains with physical activity.