PLEASE I NEED IT QUICK Good authors choose their words very carefully. Take a few minutes to write a short paragraph describing an experience you have recently had. Pick a location you went to or an event you attended. Once you have finished, read over what you have written. Now, write a second paragraph. In it, you will repeat the information from the first paragraph, but you will choose your words more carefully. Ask yourself questions like: What words capture this image exactly? What is the best word to convey how something looked, or how I felt? Take more time with the second paragraph.

Your response should be at least 150 words in total.

Once I was at a vending machine.  The vending machine was in Enterprise, Alabama.  I was there watching the Enterprise High School football game.  The soda and snack I ordered didn't come out so that made me upset.  My mom came over and gave me 10 dollars, and i went and got something from the snack bar.  I ordered some nachos, a burger, and a soda. A man bumped into me and my nacho cheese spilled on my shoe.  I was upset because I had just gotten the shoes 2 weeks ago.  I went in the restroom and cleaned my shoe off.  I later enjoyed the game while i ate my snacks.

Explanation:

I was at a vending machine one time.  The vending machine was in Enterprise, Alabama.  I was there watching the Enterprise High School football game.  The soda and snack I ordered didn't come out so that made me upset.  My mom came over and gave me 10 dollars, and i went and got something from the snack bar.  I ordered some nachos, a burger, and a soda. A man bumped into me and my nacho cheese spilled on my shoe.  I was upset because I had just gotten the shoes 2 weeks ago.  I went in the restroom and cleaned my shoe off.  I later enjoyed the game while i ate my snacks.