Writing to Persuade (Persuasive) Writing Situation: Suppose you could convince your, teacher, to not fail you for not turning in your work.

Directions for writing:
Think about why this person shouldn't fail you or to let you make up your work.

HELP!! Written in essay form.

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What does the simile add to the passage

"alice wondered a little at this,but she was too much in awe of the queen to disbelieve it".what is the effect of the author's word choice in this sentence?