Write a paragraph to complete a sample expository essay. Then review your paragraph and the essay as a whole and make changes where needed to ensure that
the style is appropriately formal.
Your assignment should include the following elements:
• A freewriting exercise that shows how you developed your ideas for filling in a
gap in an existing expository essay
• A body paragraph built from the freewriting exercise. Any topic
• Evidence of editing for a formal style; this includes making big-picture edits, as
well as more detailed proofreading

this is b. how railways dealt with people riding the trains without paying

the answer is   b suffix addition

normally working animals are domesticated and ruled by a master, a domesticator (tamer), to perform basic and important functions on a farm, for example. the value used in this context is animal labor in exchange for food. it is not so much a contrast to the story told by napoleon and the pigs, since the animals of that particular farm also performed functions on the farm through domestication. the only thing is that in this case, who rules them is a pig, also an animal, but very respected, to whom the other animals lent him submission. that's about a strong relationship of dependency between animal and owner.

the bazaar because it represents the inaccessible land of freedom to the narrator. mangan’s sister because she represents domesticity and routine to the narrator. the marketplace because it represents the suburban lifestyle to the narrator. the church because it represents spiritual healing and renewal to the narrator.