I would like to make a song about my rhyming but my flow feels all wrong a disaster
its hard getting the right sort of timing
even though I'm a lyrical master

if you haven't recognized the flow yet
you are definitely legally blind
I'm the greatest poet yet and that's a bet
time to make some paper I'm on the grind
*(The rhyme scheme is ABAB and there are ten syllables in each line c: )

Bars

Explanation:

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.