ENC1101 Sentence Fragments, Run ons, and Comma Splices Instructions: Find and correct the sentence fragments, run ons, and comma splices
in the paragraph below.
Concentration is one of the most important components to successful
writing, all writers should attempt to create an environment conducive to effective
concentration. First, you should find a room or space that is quiet. With no
distractions like music or television. Keeping a clean and clear workspace is also
another way to avoid distractions do not worry if your space is a little dirty. After
you have found a good space for concentration. You should begin prewriting.
Prewriting can be different for each person, some writers prefer to make visuals
through diagrams or “clustering." Either way, these are some effective ways to
prepare your workspace to concentrate before writing.

When you go to the writing center for identifying problems in organization, logic, expression, and/or format, which of the following should happen?

What favorite memory did the giver share with jonas? in the giver.

Read sentence 13 from the draft. some plants retain a great deal of their foliage through much of the spring and summer, but the leaves do not retain their green color for long. which detail would be best to add after sentence 13 to develop the topic? a. since the green color of the leaves that are bright and abundant during the warmer months will disappear by the time it is fall, it is important that the leaves are trimmed and kept freshly cut so that they will last for as long as possible. b. while the temperature outside may dictate when the fall colors of leaves appear, it is only one of many environmental factors that play a part in the changing of colors from green leaves to fall-colored leaves during the cooler months. c. if people want to enjoy the green color of leaves longer, trees should be planted where the environment is warmer and the days longer because chlorophyll in the leaves can only be manufactured and replaced with sunlight and warmth. d. the green chlorophyll normally masks the fall-colored pigments during the warmer months, but as sunlight becomes less abundant and trees become frozen, the fall colors of leaves become more visible as chlorophyll disappears.