How can I write this paragraph only being 2-3 sentences long - using own words ? Please help! I’ll give brainliest!!

Chillal revealed that his nails had become so fragile he had to be extremely careful while sleeping. “ I can’t move much at all.” Every half an hour or so I wake up and move my hand to the other side of the bed.” Said Chillal. He also added that his hand had become extremely painful due to the weight of the nails.

Chillal finally told that his nails had become so weak that he had to be extremely careful when he's sleeping.  “ I can’t really  move much at all.” Every half an hour or so I have to wake up to change the position of my hand to the other side of the bed.” Said Chillal. He also pointed out that his hand's had became extremely painful because of the weight of the nails.

yes the first one is correct .

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