When revising and editing word choice, a writer should 1. replace clichéd expressions with engaging phrases.
2. confirm that the text’s organizational structure is clear.
3. choose and narrow down the topic to write about.
4. ensure that the body of the text includes supporting details.

In twelve years a slave, when the passengers on the ship learn robert has smallpox, what is their reaction? “panic-stricken” “indifferent” “relieved” “oppressed”

Match the term to the purpose it has. 1. but 2. furthermore 3. meanwhile 4. in the distance 5. first 6. therefore 7. in other words 8. for instance a. show space relation b. introduce an illustration c. repetition of an idea d. take away, limit, or oppose e. show a consequence f. indicate order g. show time relation h. add ideas

The tankers are so large how did some crew members get from one point to another while on board