Rewrite the sentences below to make them more concise. I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator, Dr. Lomas, towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items drafted for her signature or approval, as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies. Please encourage your section to keep their sentences short.

Explanation:

I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator. Dr. Lomas has drafted for her signature or approval towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items. She also did it as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies.

This is the direct tone that is more concise than the long sentence from your answer. There are three shorter sentences that are considering independent clause.

we should all just get dogs.

explanation:

dear evan hansen is a stage musical with music and lyrics by benj pasek and justin paul, and book by steven levenson.

the musical opened on broadway at the music box theatre in december 2016, after its world premiere at the arena stage in washington, d.c., in july 2015 and an off-broadway production at second stage theatre from march to may 2016.

at the 71st tony awards, it was nominated for nine awards, winning six, including best musical, best score, best actor in a musical for ben platt, and best featured actress in a musical for rachel bay jones.