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English, 20.10.2020 01:01 jacamron

Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

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Komodo dragons are very deadly. These animals have very harmful effects inside their body, they can kill you within hours. Obviously, they pose a very bad threat to humans. In fact, they attack children while sneaking into people's houses. Above all this is an even bigger problem showing they are very aggressive animals. In nbc news someone named Main had an encounter, ”I was doing paperwork when a dragon slithered up the stairs of my wooden hut in Komodo National Park and went for my ankles dangling beneath my desk. When I tried to pry open the beast's powerful jaws, it locked its teeth into my hand.”

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