Please improve upon this conversation using the tips I discussed I yesterday Timmy said, "u idonnoman. I just keep thinking to myself like, what if this never happened." Timmy then proceeded to say, "I just dont know" To which Drew said, "You do you man. You just gotta go flow ocean type stuff." Drew then said, "Cowabunga". Mike then said, "But just man sometimes im not feeling it." Then everyone got up off their feet and truged into their daily job

this is what it should have been like~

Explanation:

I'm not sure, man. I keep resolving to myself, what if this had never happened? I don't know what to say. Then drew says, Just be yourself, don't be something your not.  The cowabunga can stay. Then he would say, "Dang, someday's I don't feel like living, somedays are just terrible.  and cowabunga disapears

So it would be this>

"I'm not sure, man. I keep resolving to myself, and what if this had never happened? Timmy said. "I don't know what to say."

"Just be yourself, don't be something your not" Drew says. Dang, someday's i don't feel like living, somedays are just terrible" Drew finishes.  

explanation

old disney was more kid oriented as appose to new disney it's more teen oriented.i guess what i'm trying to say is new disney is way more mature and out there then old disney. for instance all you see in new disney is bf/gf drama and old disney it was nothing like that. kids are growing up and as coorpations like disney, nickolden etc they tend to follow what kids follow so they can have more views . therefore   they have inferred   that now days kids want to have relationships and stuff so that's what disney gives them.

1. both men a determined to break douglass.

2. douglass is still considered to be one of captain anthony's possessions.

3. douglass escapes to freedom in the north and changes his name.

4. the events are usually written from a distance in time.

5. the recording of events in chronological order.