Q 1. Rewrite the following sentence. Make sure to follow these requirements: * add vivid, precise words and figurative language
* edit to make sure it is error free
* show your teacher when you are finished
Sentence to Rewrite: The soldier asked for some water.

Wounded and tired, yet still as brave as a lion, the soldier quietly asked for some water.

Explanation:

Using words and phrases to additionally describe things you talk about makes it easier for other people to picture things. Adjectives (wounded, tired) are words used to modify nouns and noun phrases, and adverbs (quietly) are words used to modify verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs.

Figurative language is the use of words in an unconventional way to convey a complicated meaning, colorful writing, clarity, or comparison. An example of figurative writing is a simile (as brave as a lion) - a comparison of one thing with another thing of a different kind.

malvolio only loves olivia because he thinks if they get married to olivia he will have a noble title, people to serve him, and fine clothes to wear. also he thinks if they get married he will have many expensive things, and he thinks he will be able to order toby around. malvolio only wants to be noble and boss people around he dose not really love olivia. but viola love for duke orsino is real she really loves orsino.

i think he will fail because he tried to get her to love him and she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool. so i think she knows what malvolio is trying to do. she knows that he only wants to marry her because he wants to be noble and boss people around so that it why i think she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool because she new he was selfish.

the group received an extra pound of butter for christmas.

the annex was delighted to hear that we'll all be receiving an extra quarter pound of butter for christmas.