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Read the sentence below about the Chicago fire of 1871. Schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the Chicago fire of 1871.

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Schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the Chicago fire.
Schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive Chicago fire of 1871.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in Chicago.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871

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