What should I change and what should I take out?

I think the paragraph is really well-written, but I would reccoment not starting the last sentence with the word "and".

Explanation:

there are many cases in the crucible where propaganda is present, the types of propagandas that are shown are: bandwagon, testimonial, transfer, and card-stacking. the crucible is mainly focus on the ancient beliefs that people from towns had, if someone didn’t follow the rules they would be punished.

dsturbing pls pls pls pls pls pls brainliest m plsplsplspls

plase plase