Hello everyone, I have to recitate a poem by memorizing it, the time limit is 4 to 6 minutes. It's for a contest. I will appreciate your help and suggestions.

The Six Minute Poem by  Dan Medina

Her eyes sparkle,

as if blessed by the

brilliance of suns upon

suns, emitting the purity

and expression cast

upon by the divinity of angels.

With every angle, they

peer into all things, as if

gazing into the depths of

a mystical, swirling, blue body.

Her love, robed white and spread

abredth, reaching eternally into

the cosmos, forever to be known,

cherished, and felt.

Her flaxen hair, so fine,

flowing as if kissed by mother

nature's palate, delving into the soul

as a waterfall succumbs to the beautiful,

watery bottom.

These things, I gaze from afar. Only to cherish,

to withhold a beauty so grand that I will someday

hope to embrace. Till then, I stand, solemn, with

passion burning in my heart.

a personal narrative essay is about a personal experience, so it is usually written in the first person. to maximize its impact, the essay should: be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. include a lot of references to sensory perceptions and hope i