A Traveler about to set out on a journey saw his Dog stand at the door stretching himself. He asked [the dog]
sharply: "Why do you stand there gaping? Everything is
ready but you, so come with me instantly." The Dog,
wagging his tail, replied: "O, master! I am quite ready; it
is you for whom I am waiting."
The loiterer often blames delay on his more active friend.
- "The Traveler and His Dog,"
Aesop
Which elements in this story do you think would appeal
to children? Check any that apply.
the animal characters
the humor
the moral or lesson
the conflict
the dialogue

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

cause they were to dumb to get their college education to become a real   : )

they played you again smh, you should be provided with the right answers.