Read the paragraph from a student's critical analysis essay In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson talks about independence through his use of big words
and fancy argument skills. First, Jefferson states his thesis, which makes it seem important that the colonists
get independence. Next, Jefferson gives evidence against the king of England and how he mistreats the
American colonies. Finally, Jefferson suggests that colonists should stop paying taxes and fight, which is the
obvious answer to the colonists' problems.
What is the best way for the student to revise the essay?
O The student should replace familiar language with more accessible language.
O The student should replace scholarly language with informal language.
O The student should replace formal language with more familiar language
O The student should replace informal language with formal language

Which phrase from the poem "when you are old" leads the reader to infer that the subject was admired for her beauty by many, but only truly loved by him? a. "old and grey" b. "a little sadly" c. "their shadows deep" d. "with love false or true"

Me asap it's an e2020 test and it's timedread the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united statesis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.what revision would most strengthen sentence 1?

What food does bottom want? a. nuts c. fruit b. hay d. milk