What is the best way to add the dependent clause above to sentence 4? A. After Derek's parents met with him he had the phone for one month to talk about his bill. B. Derek's parents met with him after he had the phone, to talk about his bill for one month. C. After he had the phone for one month, Derek's parents met with him to talk about his bill. D. He had the phone to talk about his bill after Derek's parents met with him for one month.

the answer is both an appeal to ethos and logos (if that's what your question options were)

sorry, you didn't give me the proper question

explanation:

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.