Correct the two pronoun-related errors in this paragraph? By 1977,technology had developed to the extent that Dr. Paul MacCready successfully flew a 1.6mile-long figure of eight in his Gossamer Condor. With the subsequent incorporation of light weight wonder materials such as carbon fibre and Kevlar, two years later the newly developed Gossamer Albatross achieved what was hitherto thought impossible, and crossed 22 miles of the English Channel at an average height of just five feet! After more successes in the mid-80s, an American craft, Daedelus, named after Icarus’s dad and piloted by a Greek cycling champ, flew more than 70 miles over the Mediterranean Sea in just under fourhours, earning theircreators the records for both the furthest distance flown and the longest flight duration, despite the fact that ahead wind caused the plane to ditch in the sea just yards away from our intended landing point.

well it is hard to say but everyone learns at there own pace  

i learn slow so it would take me like awhile

i hope i was so kinda

and if i was you in would goggle it and watch videos or go to your friends and ask them or maybe even your teacher for extra

what you where bleeping things out

here's some tricks. write on a book that you have read and really enjoyed. first, start by writing down basic event in the book. have your first paragraph be an intro explaining like the author, the reason the book was written if known, and other backround info like that. paragraph two explain what happens in the first few chapters and the signifigance it had. then for paragraph 3, do the same thing but for the middle. i'm pretty sure you get the point for paragraph 4. just rap things up and explain the call to action. for the final paragragh (paragraph 5) , explain your views on the book, the message, ect. tip: something that might is to go onto cliff notes or something and read the anaylisis of each chapter.

some books i recommend;

diary of anne frank

lord of the flies