Write a paragraph retelling a scene from Flowers for Algernon from another character’s voice. Use your knowledge of writing fiction to portray a dynamic character.

The character chosen is Miss Alice and the recounted scene is the moment when we learn the result of Charlie's IQ test. The narration is in the first person.

Explanation:

When I took the results of Charlie's test, I was not surprised that they had such low numbers. I know Charlie long enough to understand the difficulties that his disability imposes, but at the same time, I recognize that Charlie is a man of great abilities and that he would have a promising and fantastic future if he had the opportunity and the right treatment.

Charlie is a good and sensitive man, he has beautiful thoughts and is motivated, even within his limitations. The experimental operation can transform Charlie's life and I will continue to support and help him as much as he needs me.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."