Letter to your friends about your visit to your

Sample Paragraph

Dear Friend,

  Today I visited [place]. It was [emotion]! There's so much to tell you today! I wish you were there.

  [first detail: add details, how did you get there, what it looked like, how did you enter, who did you go with]

  [second detail: describe the place, what you did, what was interesting, what was funny, what you learned]

  [last detail: what did you do before you left, souvenirs, etc.]

This was [emotion]!

Sincerely,

 Name

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