Antietam was the most devastating one-day battle of the Civil War. A victory for the South could have been the turning point of the war. While neither of the armies would in the end be victorious in this battle, Antietam would be a major success for the Union. Which would be the best way to improve the quality of writing? Rearrange the sequence of ideas. Vary the sentence length. Redefine the purpose. Replace the be verbs with action verbs.

The perimeter of a picture frame is 24 inches. if the width of the picture frame is 5 inches, what is the length of the picture frame?

The rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago.which choice combines these two sentences from paragraph two to achieve a coherent flow of ideas? a) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden" and permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. b) permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago and the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." c) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden; " and so the permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. d) because of the rich natural resources which made the sacramento valley a ‘garden of eden,’ native americans established permanent villages there 8,000 years ago.

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