Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can Deepak do to strengthen his paper? He should try to keep all of his sentences the same length. He should use more than one technique to integrate his evidence. He should make sure he has a transition for every sentence in the paper. He should avoid extended definitions that provide too much information

Read the paragraph that Deepak wrote to explain how he used a checklist to revise his paper.

I checked my transitions to make sure they made sense. I also reread my sentences to determine whether they were too similar in style and length. I fixed a couple to add variety. I found one or two words that needed extended definitions and added them. I made sure that I summarized all research evidence throughout the paper.

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can Deepak do to strengthen his paper?

He should try to keep all of his sentences the same length.

He should use more than one technique to integrate his evidence.

He should make sure he has a transition for every sentence in the paper. He should avoid extended definitions that provide too much information.

He should use more than one technique to integrate his evidence.

Explanation:

Based on the revisions listed in the paragraph, the other thing that Derek can do to strengthen his paper is to make use of more than one technique to integrate his evidence.

Based on the given paragraph, there are revision techniques that are employed to eliminate errors and ambiguity,so therefore for Deepak to improve the quality of his work, he should use more than one technique as doing it this way will make reading less monotonous and more interesting.

jeez la wheeze! i just checked other people who had the same question as you and both had terrible answers.

i hope i could be a little bit of a though!

hmm, lets see here. okay! so, i don't know the passages exactly since i haven't taken that quiz before, but! i will try to the best i can.

if you need on what igbo means, ill give you a hand.

igbo means a member of a people of southeastern nigeria.

so, they're asking you, "what passage uses igbo words or phrases and in at least 100 words, identify the kinds of context clues the author uses to hint at the words' meaning."

so basically, don't stress or over look this.

look closely at the passages and see if you can spot any of those hints! it doesn't have to be all, remember, its a quiz! no right or wrong answers.

the teachers are always there to and if you are struggling on this topic they will notice it in your score on the quiz and you.

(; i do hope this is useful to you!     < 3