Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the paraphrase?
Henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be
in a logical order.
Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to
make the story come alive.
Henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point
of view consistent
Henrique needs to change the point of view to make the
sequence clearer.

How could an audio recording most likely convey the characters emotions during the scene

The greatest gift the sumerians gave the world was the invention of writing. the sumerians were a wealthy people. they needed some way to keep track of what they owned. they began drawing pictures. they used a reed as a pen. they drew on soft pieces of clay. the soft clay was then dried in the sun. the tablet became a permanent record. later, the sumerian drawings changed into wedge-shaped symbols. this kind of writing is called cuneiform. by putting symbols together, the sumerians could write entire sentences.

When the author quotes the actress sarah brown as saying, i truly believe that this film gives an important message to audiences, the author is using a) repetition. b) a testimonial. c) an ethical appeal. d) the bandwagon method.