Like the rest of the novel the above excerpt is written from third person point of view rewrite the excerpt using first person point of view instead with buck as your narrator think about how the event might be told differently through the eyes of buck make sure that you use descriptive words and phrases that create a visual image for the reader just as jack london did in the original

Explanation:

i hope you get it As I sit there I make no effort to struggle I know I have done something wrong I dont even whine It was the first time I have ever falied I have given a sufficient reason to drive Hal into rage As he changes the whip for the customary club I refuse to move as the blows come torwards me it stings and it is hard but I have deserved it like my freinds I am barly able to get up but then I make the choice to refuse to give up as I have a strange sensation of a impending doom as I lay there I remember the thin and rotten ice I have felt under my feet all day it seemed that I sensed that disaster is close at hand as  I as I lay there and Think I all of a sudden feel the pain rush back into my body and sense all I have suffered I guess that blows dont hurt to much but as the blows fall upon me I feel the spark of life flicker away I was nearly dead feeling the warm rays of heaven when all of a sudden John Thornton span upon the man who wielded the club.