In about 200 words, write your own description of a garden to create a powerful atmosphere. In your description: · Cover as many senses as possible · Use evocative, unusual, polysyllabic word

The climate was pleasant and cozy, it brought a pure breathable and inspiring air, probably because of the amount of exuberant, admirable and beautiful vegetation, which filled the place with a mastery capable of surprising the most emotionless of the creatures. With the presence of large fruit trees, we were able to delight in all the wonders that this garden offered, in addition to enjoying the most delicious aroma of flowers that presented themselves with the most varied species: roses, orchids, daisies, violets, chrysanthemums, jasmine and so many others that have equal beauty and aroma. It was totally possible to sit on one of the benches left by some parts and enjoy the scenery, write poems, paint pictures, or just get inspired and be influenced by the power of nature.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

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